February 12, 2019

A Scoop From Our Summer Holidays.

 Summer of 2019

 Rainbows end was so much fun.
The water at the beach felt good.
Looked at some furry animals.
Had a delicious dinner at a restaurant.
watching exciting and interesting movies.
Eating CHOCOLATE ice-cream!
Eating amazing takeaways with my cousin.
listening to relaxing nice music. Watching cool videos.
That was Summer...




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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 25, 2019

    Hi my name is Emma from Paroa school.
    I really like your title and how the writing is in on a ice cream.
    To improve your work you could cut out the white paper so it is just the ice cream.
    Did you draw that ice cream? By Emma.

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  2. AnonymousMarch 25, 2019

    Hi I’m Lucy from Paroa School
    I really like your way to share what you did over the summer. Maybe next time you could write in pen so we can read it better. How did you make them?
    Lucy

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