August 11, 2020

Show Not Tell

Some of us are learning to show not tell in our writing. We are working on writing more detailed sentences by using descriptive language. 
Here are some examples of our learning we have been doing.


3 comments:

  1. kia ora Manpreet,
    these poster are really pretty I like the first Show not tell with the purple and blue background any way have a nice rest of your week
    Luisapeta

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  2. WOW.
    Kia Ora Manpreet,
    This is Ema From Room Eleven.I just would like to say that these posters expressing something but not actually saying is super clever. These emotive, adjectives your class has used outblows me. I love the creativity and this really made me interested.
    Take Care

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    1. Kia ora Ema,
      How nice of you to have left a comment. Thank you for your detailed comment. We are learning to add detail in our writing by using descriptive language. Hope you are well and looking after yourself and enjoying online learning. Ka Kite.

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