Some of us are learning to show not tell in our writing. We are working on writing more detailed sentences by using descriptive language.
Here are some examples of our learning we have been doing.
This is a record of a class blog at Edmund Hillary School, Auckland, New Zealand.
August 11, 2020
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Positive - Something done well
Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say
Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
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kia ora Manpreet,
ReplyDeletethese poster are really pretty I like the first Show not tell with the purple and blue background any way have a nice rest of your week
Luisapeta
WOW.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Manpreet,
This is Ema From Room Eleven.I just would like to say that these posters expressing something but not actually saying is super clever. These emotive, adjectives your class has used outblows me. I love the creativity and this really made me interested.
Take Care
Kia ora Ema,
DeleteHow nice of you to have left a comment. Thank you for your detailed comment. We are learning to add detail in our writing by using descriptive language. Hope you are well and looking after yourself and enjoying online learning. Ka Kite.