May 3, 2019

Our Holiday Recounts

Ellakaye's Recount Karson and Nathaniel's Recount Joshua and Senric's Recount Soloia's Recount Victoria and Ema's Recount

2 comments:

  1. AnonymousJune 07, 2019

    Hi its Emma from paroa school.
    I really enjoyed all of the recounts,
    To improve some of you could work on your punctuation and capitals.
    Bye :)

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  2. Hello Ellakaye this is Ema, Nese and Victoria. We love how you kept your work simple. Your recount was really interesting and just wanted me to kept reading and reading. I have no heads up and questions for you.

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