October 22, 2019

Argumentation Writing

10 comments:

  1. Hello Karson, this is Soloia and Emora. We love your effort in your work and know that your work is worth spending time to read on. Our question is, did you really work on this alone?

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  2. Hello my name is Georgia and Im from Paroa school.
    I really like how you showed different reasons to agree and disagree and how you had a poll.Next time you could have summarised the reasons to make it a bit shorter but other than that it was great

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  3. Hi Guys, I really enjoyed reading these facts and information.
    Mabye next time you could add more commas.

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  4. Hello my name is Harley from paroa school this is a good post but i would say no to this becuase what if your playing video games and its 7 and you have to do homework thats on your laptop (Or School devices).

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  6. Hi, This is Carter and Liam here, I really like the ideas and believe that it is a good opinion but there should be some exceptions, as in letter writing, homework and other tasks to do at home that are required. I really like the wording and persuasive language you guys used and think that it's really good. It reminds us of when we did our persuasive writing for letters.

    Goodbye, Carter and Liam

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  7. hi mack here from paroa school. I do like your post and there are some good reasons but i don't think kids should be banned from there devices becuase what if you need to do your homwork or stuff related to school or work. But it is still a great post :)

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  8. Hi im Dion and I dont think that should be because then you cant watch movies with your family.You cant watch most sports and its also a way to make time go faster when you auctuly have nothing to do.

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  9. Hello Elena,Neha and Victoria,this is Ilaisaane and Savannah we enjoyed reading your information about why should kid be banned from screen time after 7pm.Your facts were really inserting to read.Great job!

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  10. Hi karson we like your post it is really interesting for us and it is really helpful too and we like your ideas keep up the good work.

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