August 8, 2019
Argumentation Writing - Should birds be kept as pets by Ema and Ruqa, Neha and Elena, Ila and Faafua. Should Zoos be banned by Albert and Elena.
Neha and Elena
Ila and Faafua
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Hi Ema and Ruqa,
ReplyDeleteWell done on sharing your opinions with reasons. You are really beginning to get confident in sharing your point/opinion on both sides. Keep up the great argumentation writing.
Room 1 can learn a lot from your work as it's a great example.
Manpreet and Room 1.
Kia ora
ReplyDeleteHi, Ema and Ruqa this is Neha and Savannah from your class. We like your presintation on Should birds be kept as pets by people. We really like reading your opinion but there was a mistake on the agree slide and besides that keep up the good work.
Kia Ora Neha and Elena,This is Mahara from you class.I really like your information slides but I don't understand what the little bird dot is when you are finish your sentence.My question for you is that maybe you should but more detail's in it.nut for a facted I really like how you did this with elena.If you want to comment on my blog here is my blog link http://edhillmaharar.blogspot.com/
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Dion and I like that you showed us your reasons wuy should and not to let them be in there I think they shouldont because they wont be used to the wild when they are sent out and could die by preadetors.Thanks
ReplyDeleteHello, I'm Emma from Paroa school this was a very creative slide show
ReplyDeleteTo be BTB (Better Than Before) you could add some more punctuation next time.
kia ora Ema and Rupa this is Savannah and Victoria. We found your Argumentation writing interesting and all your work made sense .yous really done an amazing on it .We were wondering if it was hard? if you say yes even when it was hard you should be proud of yourself and keep up the good work
ReplyDeleteHello For the zoo one i think both because if they are free they could have a higher chance of going extencet because of hunter so they should only have endangered ones in them but not in cages for people to look at just a big open cage so they can do them and not be somthing for money.
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