This is a record of a class blog at Edmund Hillary School, Auckland, New Zealand.
August 12, 2019
Student inquiry presentations on inspirational people in New Zealand and 10 inspirational people in the world.
In Room 1 students have been exploring what inspiration means, how we look at some people for inspiration and learn from their achievements.
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In Room 1 students have been exploring what inspiration means, how we look at some people for inspiration and learn from their achievements....
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In Room 1 we created an Art Piece with koru patterns on it. Koru means growth and we all are going to look at this piece of art and remember...
Hi this is Ila and Faafua and we Just wanted to say that your work is good it makes sense and it has a lot of information, one question where did you guys get these pieces of information from?
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Ema , Emora and Ruqa. We really enjoyed your work on 10 inspirational people in the world. We had no idea that the word christ was in christmas. It was really interesting reading your work. Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteTalofa lava Ema,Ruqayat and Emora this is Ilaisaane and Viena your classmates.
ReplyDeleteWe were reading your inquiry on 10 inspirational people in the world what we have found good in your inquiry is that you wrote about Jesus Christ and why he is inspirational to you.
Dear Angle,Neha,Ila,Elena and Albert we are really inprest of reading your hard work but there are little things that you might need to take care of like punting the full stops where it's meant to be put. Also like making the sentence make sense and our question is that how long did you do the work? by: Va'a and Savannah.
ReplyDeleteHello Savanna & Viena,
ReplyDeleteThis is a good inspirational people slides because some people can learn how to respect people
and they can turn confident and get inspired by the people who became something in their life.
Kia ora Tevita thank you for your wonderful comment,yes we can learn how to respect people and we think that you are gonna become something good in your life.
DeleteHello Ema, Ruqa, & Emora this is Joshua & Senric from class. We really enjoyed reading your work on 10 inspirational people in the world. What we found interesting was that Albert Einstein changed the world in enormous ways. You guys are doing great keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Angel, Elena, Ila, Albert and Neha. We really enjoyed reading your preasintaion on ten inspirational people from New Zealand. We also loved how you put lots of information about the person you were reseaching.
ReplyDeleteEllakaye and Ruqayat
Kia Ora
ReplyDeleteHi , Savanaah and Viena this is Neha from your class. I really enjoyed reading your presentation on 10 inspirational people in New Zealand but there are some mistakes in your background and besides that keep up the good work.
Hi Neha,Thank you for your comment I will fix my mistake in the background.
DeleteHi, Its Emma from paroa school.
ReplyDeleteI think that these are very good slides.
To be BTB (Better than before) you could Maybe add more punctuation and reread for spelling mistakes.
Hey Emma, It's Ema and Savannah from Edmund Hillary School. Thank you for your compliment and your lovely comment. We will take your advice next time and thank you for commenting on our blog.
DeleteHi, I'm Grace Williams from paroa school.
ReplyDeleteI really love how you guys have laid out you slides and put really good descriptions
to why you find them insperational.
To be BTB(better than before) you could have said why you chose to do this.
I would love to hear back from you thanks.
Hello Grace, this is Ema and Savannah from Edmund Hillary School.
DeleteThank you for your lovely comment, we thought your comment was thoughtful and lovely and yes we will say why we chose this next time so thank you for your advice.
Hi i'm Fraser and all those people are very inspirational.
ReplyDeleteTalofa lava fraser,this is Viena and savannah from Edmund Hillary school,and yeah all these people are inspirational thank you for your comment and I hope you comment on one of our class blogs
DeleteHi Albert, it's Karson and I like your 10 inspirational people in New Zealand and you also put really good information on the 10 people you did and it also
ReplyDeleteinstresting and is also nice for me to know why they are inspiring and also it's nice to know what they did to become inspirational and I didn't know the Winston Churchill was the leader of the world war two army.
Hello Savannah and Viena this is Ema and Mahara from your class. We would like to say you did a really good job on this work and it was very interesting to read. Our most favourite part that you said about these 10 inspirational is that, Jacinda Ardern was the youngest prime minister and never gave up. This inquiry had a message that you should never give up no matter what people say about you and achieve your goals.
ReplyDeleteKia ora this is Viena from your class and I have read your wonderful comment and what you said in your comment was very nice and we will never give up no matter what people say about us thank you for your comment
DeleteHi! This is Miro from Paroa school. I love your work! Next time you could say which person was your favorite. Thanks!
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