August 21, 2019
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In Room 1 students have been exploring what inspiration means, how we look at some people for inspiration and learn from their achievements....
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In Room 1 we created an Art Piece with koru patterns on it. Koru means growth and we all are going to look at this piece of art and remember...
Kia ora Neha and Albert, this is Ema, Ruqa and Victoria. Your story was very amazing and interesting. But maybe next time you should make it more as a descriptive piece
ReplyDeletebecause we kinda heard a recount but overall your story was good. Our question is, what did you learn about the solar system?
Hi Neha and Albert this is Soloia and Ilaisaane from your class.What we have found good in your descriptive writing is that you have wrote about what the room you had went into looked like and what you guys had done inside the room.Great work!
ReplyDeleteHi Ila and Faafua thank you for asking that kind of question also our favorite animal is baby pandas.
DeleteHi Va´a and Savannah this is Ila and Faafua we like your writing it has a lot of information just one qustieon whats your favourite animal?
ReplyDeleteHi Neha and Albert this is Va'a, I really enjoyed reading your work also you have really improved your work and I know that you have been working very well also I can tell that you have been focused on your work and you are really talented but I know that you two can do more of the work.
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ReplyDeleteHi , Vaa and Savannah this is Neha from your class. I really enjoyed reading your descriptive writing on the Auckland Zoo. It was really nice to see your imagination working. Keep up the good work.
Hi my name is Dion I like your blog post it makes alot of sence thanks.bye
ReplyDeleteKia Ora, this is Ema from Edmund Hillary School. Thanks for commenting on our blog and your compliment was very nice. But maybe next time you could proofread your comment.
DeleteKIA Ora Vaa and Savannah this is Senric & faafua from our class we really like your blog post about auckland zoo. it was interesting to read.
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