August 28, 2019
Narrative Writing
We are learning to structure our stories using an orientation (introduction), complication(Problem) and resolution (Solution).
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Hello Soloia and Emora, this is Ema and Nese. Your title of your story was very interesting and amazing which was fantastic. I love how you started with someone saying something because not all story starts with the or on so nice job!
ReplyDeleteTena koe Emora and Soloia. I really loved your story about the clockhouse. I thought this was a creative and imaginative story.
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Hi Josh and Nathan this is Va'a and Savannah we really like your work and it has really impressed us but there are some mistake's that you really need to fix and please proof read your sentence.
ReplyDeleteNamaste Emora and soloia,
ReplyDeleteThis is senric your classmate from room 1 i really like your story the clock house it was really interesting to read.
Tena koe Emora and Soloia,
ReplyDeleteI really loved your story, the clock house. I thought that it was an interesting topic. I also think that it was a very creative narrative, I have one question, when will part 2 to come out?
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Kia ora Emora and soloia this is Savannah i really enjoyed reading your story and i like the title it was interesting to read. I just want to say keep up the good work and your amazing writing.
ReplyDeleteHi Edmund Hillary school. I enjoyed reading through some of your posts but have a tip. If you post you need to check to make sure that the sharing settings are on all so others can access your story. I love the content otherwise. I can relate from some of our stories we made. Bye,
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ReplyDeleteHello Emora and Soloia this is Vaa and Victoria .We love your story on the clock house it was so interesting to read we like how you guys put amazing words into your story it was fantastic keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteHello My name is Harley from paroa school i really like these storys you should make more of them they are really good!
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